为了帮助考生们更好地学习、备考雅思,济南新航道学校为大家整理了增强语句表现力的六张,济南新航道专注于济南雅思培训,提供专业雅思信息供考生们参考。
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:
Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:
1) Weak: The team members are good players.
Revision: The team members play well.
2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:
1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.
Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.
Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.
二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。例如:
1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.
Better: She compares prices and quality.
三、尽量运用主动语态。例如:
1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.
Better: Charity has supported the organization.
2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如:
1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如:
1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.
六、多样化用词
词汇量小,自然无法“用词多样化”。而词汇量的积累并非一朝一夕之功。那么,还剩下几天就要考试了,单词完全没时间背了,怎么办?——步,有的放矢!怎么做?动手写。所有考过的作文真题都是很有利用价值的。这些题目看起来各不相同,涉及生活方方面面,其实真的动手写起来就会发现,思路总是相似的。尤其是写到10篇以上之后,遇到一个新题目思路马上就会滚滚而来。词汇量没有,思路可不能也没有啊!所以,培养这种题感是在复习中需要做的步。
第二步,词汇量远不到四级标准的人,写作文的时候最头痛的一件事就是,脑海中的中文思路入滔滔江水喷涌不息,到笔端流成英文时,却连自来水流都不如。还时常停水。怎么办?别着急,用文曲星和金山词霸查。查多了,你就会发现,其实除了个别专有名词之外,我们自己写作文的时候,常用的形容词,副词,甚至动词,就那么几个。背这些词自然是容易多了。找到最适合自己的,背过(不要追求复杂,一定要背对才行。
既然花了那么多钱把我们的意见写出来,与其感情平平,不如慷慨激昂。很多辅导班都强调思路问题,强调出奇制胜。可是,寻找与众不同的思路真的很辛苦。尤其是9月以后考试的朋友,没有办法提前想思路了,在考场上好不容易想到一些论点论据,还要想会不会太大众化云云……实在是不实际。那么,试着完全站到自己选择的那个立场上去吧!词汇量小,文采平平不妨碍感情的释放。而这字里行间弥漫的坚定情绪,便是我们转移考官关于“词汇多样化”的法宝了。人都是有感情的不是?所以我觉得,对付主观性考题,主观的方法不失为一条可行之路。
不过朋友们在备考时写作文找不到这种感觉不要紧。备考时有多压抑大家都理解,所以那会儿写的作文就不要回头看了。寻找自己词汇漏洞就可以了,但是还是奉劝各位战友千万不要把分数压在口语和作文上。只要有时间,还是要下功夫在实力的提高上。
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