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　　54. Consequently, the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.

　　因此，业余工作挣来的钱将强有力地支持学生们继续他们的求学生活。

　　55. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.

　　通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响，我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作，这将有利于学生和他们的家庭，甚至整个社会。

　　56. These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.

　　现在，越来越多的人们开始抱怨工作比以前更有压力。许多专家指出这是现代社会发展必然的结果，无法避免。

　　57. It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have become an indispensable part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.

　　人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一部分。它们使我们的生活更舒适，减少了大量劳动。

　　58. At the same time, along with the benefits of such machines, employees must study knowledge involved in such machines so that they are able to control them.

　　同时，随着这些机器带给我们的好处，员工们也必须要学习与之相关的知识以便使用它们。

　　59. No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.

　　没有人能否认这一基本事实：对于一般工人来讲，轻松掌握这些技术是不可能的。

　　60. In the second place, there seem to be too many people without job and not enough job position .

　　第二方面，失业的人似乎太多而又没有足够的工作岗位。

　　61. Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.

　　成千上万的人们不得不花费更多的精力和时间学习新的技术和知识，使得他们在就业市场能保持优势。

　　62. According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family.

　　根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。

　　63. From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society, it is not necessary a bad thing.

　　通过以上讨论，我完全相信，随着现代社会的进步，幽闲的生活方式正在消失并不是件坏事。

　　64. The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years.

　　近些年，国际旅游的问题引起了广泛关注。

　　65. Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism.

　　许多人认为国际旅游对经济发展有积极作用，应鼓励地方政府发展国际旅游。

　　66. But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local history.

　　但是这些人忽视了国际旅游可能会给当地环境和历史造成的灾难性的影响。

　　67. As for me, I'm firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited, for the following reasons:

　　就我而言，我坚定地认为国外旅游者的数量应得到限制，理由如下：

　　68. In addition, in order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment.

　　另外，为了吸引旅游者，大量人工设施被修建，这对环境是不利的。

　　69. For lack of distinct culture, some places will not attract tourists any more. Consequently, the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.

　　由于缺乏独特的文化，一些地方不再吸引旅游者。因此，国外旅游者数量的快速增加可能最终会导致当地旅游业的衰败。

　　70. There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.

　　近些年，父母要求他们的孩子接受额外的教育呈增长的势头。

　　71. This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.

　　这一现象在全世界许多地方已引起了广泛关注。

　　72. Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain , their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.

　　许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优点，通过学习，他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有好处的。

　　73. In the first place, extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children. Educational experts point out that, it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom.

　　首先，额外的学习对孩子们的身体发育是不利的。教育专家指出，孩子们在枯燥的教室里呆了一整天后，从事一些体育活动，而不是额外的学习，是非常重要的。

　　74. Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.

　　孩子们正处于身体快速发育时期，缺乏体育锻炼可能会对他们未来的生活造成严重的影响。

　　75. In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.

　　第二，从心理上讲，大部分孩子似乎对额外的学习没有什么好感。

　　76. It is hard to imagine a student focusing their energy on textbook while other children are playing.

　　当别的孩子在玩耍的时候，很难想象一个学生能集中精力在课本上。

　　77. Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.

　　而且，由于要额外地学习，孩子们没有多少时间和同龄的孩子玩耍和交流，很难培养他们的个性和交际能力。他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病。

　　78. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldn't be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school.

　　通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管额外学习的确有很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。因此，放学后强迫孩子额外学习是不明智的。

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