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雅思写作真题与考官范文(一)

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(范文一)2012. 10. 11
Some people think personal happiness is directly
related to economic success, while others believe this
depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give
your own opinion.
In  this essay,  I shall explain why  I  think  that  there are  factors other  than economic
success involved in a person's level of happiness.
The suggestion that personal happiness is directly related to their economic success
appears reasonable at first glance. However, it assumes that a person cannot be happy
without money. First of all, it doesn't take into account interpersonal relationships with
friends and family members. There are many people who are happy, even though their
personal level of economic success is not high, because they enjoy positive relationships
with the people around them. For example, they might enjoy helping to raise children
or become involved in community events.
Another factor is the social and political environment that a person lives in. It seems
to me unlikely that rich people in war-torn countries or places with high crime are going
to be happier than poorer people in safe parts of the world. Socially, if people feel that
they are able to do certain things, such as work in a particular field or participate in free
time activities  that  they enjoy,  they are  likely  to be happier  than people who cannot
do  these  things. Therefore, unduly prohibitive  laws seem  likely  to  reduce  individual
happiness.
Some scientists claim to have found evidence that the balance of certain chemicals
in  the human brain can  influence our  levels of  individual happiness.  In other words,
they think it is possible that people can have some of the ingredients of happiness yet
still not be happy. This may help explain why people living in similar circumstances have
different levels of individual happiness.
To conclude,  I cannot see any direct relation ship between happiness and economicsuccess at the individual level.

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